Sunday, September 30, 2007
Badd Writtings
Horrible Writing!!!!
!!!!!! Grrrrrrrhhhhh!!!!!!
Saturday, September 29, 2007
Bad Writing
Oof
The, comma,
Friday, September 28, 2007
My difining "bad" writing
Maybe the essance of bad writing is to just a brainstorm in no real pattern. Just start typing one word to the next. Maybe the key is to not proofread:* look for clarity in the flow. Not the before mentioned flow this is more the flow of long prose that is an unending river of thoughtlessness that will soon be overlooked by the mass of masses that exist in our world for today and tomonrrow.
-thanks Roman
Example of Bad Writing--Why we need to Proofread
Wednesday, September 26, 2007
All good Words
Tuesday, September 25, 2007
Say What?
Monday, September 24, 2007
Hammurabi, St. Thomas, and Mohammad face The Scarlet Letter
A Discussion on Violence
Saint Thomas Aquinas and Hammurabi Having Coffee
Philosiphizing With a Wall
St. Thomas and Bede
Sunday, September 23, 2007
St. Thomas Aquinas, Bebe, Gilgamesh
On the Fear of Death
A problem was posed in which a elderly man feared that his life was uneventful and soon coming to an inevitable close. The man’s lament agonized him and so he first sought out the advice of St. Thomas Aquinas who told him that his life could be spiritually prolonged by his faith in God, and that his revelation of one God would be the event of his life.
The man then sought the help of Shin-eqi-unninni, who told him that like Gilgamesh, he could not attain immortality. Shin-eqi-unninni told him only Humbaba can live forever and to seek peace with his lament and mortality so that he could rest.
Finally the man came along a well-versed student, who asked him if living was not a great event in itself. And that furthermore, that his fear could awaken him to the joys of emotion and sensation that come from being temporary, without which he could not experience.
Myself, Hammrubi, and Sigmund Freud
Muhammad and Hammurabi Conversation: Choosing a Religion
St. Thomas Aquinas, Bede, and Gilgamesh Converse
Bede is contemplating what mix of human-god could create the 1/3 human by 2/3 god mix. Bede uses his understanding of mathematics to show the impossibility of Gilgamesh's being.
St. Thomas Aquinas takes a theological approach. His argument is based on only one God and although Gilgamesh may be god-like; he is no god.
Gilgamesh is more concerned about his legend as a champion poker player; he wants to ensure his immortality and escape the 1/3 human aspect of his existence. His reality is based on his "Epic" story: he does not question the gods.
In the end, St. Thomas Aquinas, Bede, and Gilgamesh each relies on their own way of defining the world to make sense of it all.
Thomas and Gilgamesh
"Who?" Gilgamesh asked
"Thoma...."
"No I heard that part... I was referring to this Lord. Lord Whom? Of what land?" Said Gilgamesh.
Thomas looked at him as if daft, and then continued on... "Why, OUR Lord, the Lord of all things, Lord of Hosts... You know... the Big Kahuna? The guy that made all that there is including you?"
" OOOOHHH"... Gilgamesh replied smiling..."You mean Anu or Enlil!"
"What?" Thomas said in a suspicious tone. "Who's this Anu? I am speaking of God..."
"Yeagh I know... The God, the big dog, Anu, and there's Marduk, Enlil and Ishtar and..."
"BLASPHEMY!!!!" Thomas screeched!
St. Thomas, Bede, and Muhammad
Friday, September 21, 2007
Conversation between St. Thomas and Hammurabi
Hammurabi was an exalted prince, who feared God, to bring about the rule of righteousness in the land.
Both of these men believed that God played a major role in government.
St. Thomas believed that God governed men individually and therefore all government acted under Divine intellect.
Hammurabi feared God and used that fear to create the fist record of laws that we know of. Theses laws were influenced by his belief in God and therefore, God was instrumental in the creation of these laws.
Thursday, September 20, 2007
Of Story Tellers and Historians
Wednesday, September 19, 2007
Conversation between Muhammad and Gilgamesh
Gilgamesh
The Code of Hammurabi is very different. It has a clear purpose and is easily understood. It is a clear set of laws in which to live by and the punishments that would be placed on those who did not. But they are both pieces that are very important to us historically.
Monday, September 17, 2007
Epic of Gilgamesh grades
Saturday, September 15, 2007
The Epic of the Online Class
Monday, September 10, 2007
Epic of the Online Class
In contrast to Gilgamesh, King Hammurabi codified rules to govern society. People under Hammurabi's rule could look to laws in order to settle disputes and maintain civility with their neighbors. If you were inside the "walls" you obeyed the laws. Although some of the punishments were severe, people knew what to expect for commiting crimes and unjustices.
Society became more civil with the rule of law and consequently Babylon flourished.
Netiquette, in modern communications, establishes rules that govern our actions in a medium that could lend itself to misunderstanding. Emails, blogs, and other forms of communication with technology lack the ability to detect facial expressions, subtle sarcasm, or voice influctions that could change the intended meaning of a communication.
Rules empower people to govern themselves and take responsibility for their actions so, as a soceity, we can prosper.
Sunday, September 9, 2007
The Epic of the Online Classroom
The Epic of the Online Class
Also with all three of these is the need for a higher, recognized authority. In the Epic of Gilgamesh, it was the gods. In the Code of Hammurabi, it is the law. The judges are also a higher authority figure, though they too are punishable by the law. In the online classroom, it is, of course, the professors teaching the course, as well as the Netiquette rules/laws.
Epic of Gilgamesh
That being said the Epic of Gilgamesh and the Code of Hammurabi is just one of the versions of the beginning of man and laws as the Bible is another version. All ancient civilizations have heroes and villains it is how we understand good from evil or right from wrong. But there is a drawback and that is what that civilization considered right from wrong. When we read Gilgamesh and his pursuits of young girls and bedding the bride before the groom we think what a tyrant. His people began thinking that he was overstepping boundaries as well a requested godly assistance to rectify to problem. What causes one to question a leader’s actions is to question himself with “Would I behave this way if I were the leader?” This is how laws get modified and that would include the behavior of Hammurabi version of laws as well.
From these basic beginnings of extreme laws and abidance comes the more justified laws and abidance of today. These laws of course have been refined throughout the ages especially by the Romans which happen to be an adopted idea for use in current U.S. laws and abidance. We can take both of the stories and learn from how mankind’s idea of laws started and their reasons behind them. I believe the idea of laws at first was not just about control but it was about civilizing societies so they would worked together to better our survival and increase our kind. Unfortunately the human ambition to be on top can drive the most sincere people to be power hungry which is what I think happened in both stories. Gilgamesh was powerful to the point of madness and Enkidu used his power to maintain companionship with Gilgamesh. Hammurabi was so consumed with his way or the highway attitude that he made so many laws to ensure his way that he couldn’t keep up with which caused widespread fear. It is a prime example of how such behaviors are not just reserved for the “barbaric’ but has the capability to reveal itself just as easily within a civilized foundation of today.
The Epic of the Online Class
The Epic of Gilgamesh Online
The Epic of Online Class
The Epic of Gilgamesh is told through a story. In the course of the story Gilgamesh learns several life lessons about how one should behave. He is punished by the gods and learns to appreciate his people. The Code of Hammurabi is a list of laws, a boast about a king and a text to instill fear from the gods. Both texts are written for social conduct.
In an online classroom culture and social expectations are also present; there are rules of conduct. Most people learn the rules of online communication through trial and error. Now, there are several written texts on what is expected in online communication, what is deemed inappropriate and what is acceptable.
The Epic of Gilgamesh and The Code of Hammurabi provide valuable insight into the earliest communication of man. They provide a sense of governing, something society naturally strives for. They provide an irreplaceable glimpse of things such as grammar patterns, social concerns during that time, and appropriate means with which to deal with situations.
Gilgamesh and the ruler called Hammurabi provide leadership to the tenants of their land, as well as a sense of rules and laws. These strict means of regulation have further morphed into what our society knows as government or laws today. This, in turn, brings up the epic of the online class.
The sense of leadership, ruling, and regulation that has been evident since the early writings of The Epic of Gilgamesh and The Code of Hammurabi continues on through the online classroom. Regardless of what social class or setting one is participating in, there are social norms, which is also evident through the learning of an online classroom.
The Epic of the Online Classroom
Traditionally epics are viewed as stories such as the Epic of Gilgamesh. However, I think a case can be built that the online classrooms today are forming their own version of an epic. They are doing this with one of the newest form of written communication, the internet. The students in online classrooms are on continuous adventures through relations with professors, other students, and even technology; in doing so they are developing episodes important to education.
Characters in an epic story would have to adhere to certain expectations. Students in online classrooms are also expected to follow certain expectations. An example of guidelines an epic character may have to follow is those listed in the Code of Hammaurabi. While those guidelines would not apply to a student in an online classroom, students have their own set of expectations: Nettiquette.
The Epic of Gilgamesh is the oldest written communication, and the code of Hammurabi is the oldest set of laws known to man. It is exciting to know that we can review history and see how far man has come, as well as being a part of the other end of the spectrum – the newest form of written communication with its own set of laws.
The Epic of the Online Class
It is intriguing to read these ancient writings and relate them to the biographies and laws of today’s world. Maybe it is lack of inspiration and following, but it is difficult to imagine people thousands of years from now discovering a biography written about a leader today with the same admiration. Gilgamesh was a king so impressive that his adventures were meant to be celebrated for eternity. There is no doubt of embellishment in the Epic of Gilgamesh, but for the author to have gone through the meticulous effort to chisel twelve tablets to ensure Gilgamesh’s triumphs were continued, gives us some idea of his stature in the Sumerian culture.
The Epic of the Online Class
Another striking element in these readings are the parallels between them and the bible. Even the tone of the writing in the code of Hammurabi sounds very much like something out of that text despite the fact that one culture is polytheistic and the other is monotheistic with a few thousand years in between. Yet, out of the polytheistic religion comes this monotheistic religion... How? And what effect does this have on social order? I need to understand more about the history and so I plan on spending a good deal of time reading into it, but I would be interested to hear other’s thoughts and/or information about it as well.
The Epic of the Online Class
The Code of Hammurabi is one that is made up of laws that governed the society during that time. There were rules and laws the citizens had to follow or be punished for any wrong doing. Here is where one could say there is a tie in between the Code of Hammurabi and the rules of Netiquette. Whether it is through person to person interactions or an interaction between people on the internet there are rules that much be followed. If one does not follow those rules they will have to suffer the consequences of their actions.
The Epic of the Online Class
Just as we followed Gilgamesh, so to will we follow our professors. As we as a class wander through the darkened chambers of historical documents we will read the same words. We will speak with one another and reach some similar conclusions. In the end we will move away from out temporary scholastic connection and return to our own disparate cultural environments, each of us with our own wholly unique understanding of history through time.